Genetic engineering is an important issue in society today. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In modern days, scientists are exerting genetic manipulation which becomes bitter controversy among people to serve our agriculture. Meanwhile, it is true to say ta this feat of science is likely to be considered beneficial for our life, some people opposed to this view.
Generally, it is alleged that gene engineering has a significant impact on agricultural revolution. While the harmful pests are developing resistance to a wide range of pesticides, the indiscrimination of which has proved to be counter productive and posed a threat to human health and environment, clearly genetic manipulation appears to be an advantageous strategy. As a matter of fact, genetic modification can help grow plants that produce poison to obnoxious pests. So that after boosting crop yield with this new method, the farmers now can reduce the risk of suffering chronic diseases and environmental pollution as well as improve the quality of their produce.
Conversely, it cannot be denied that changing gene may have unpredictable repercussion on human life. Actually, food which is applied genetic engineering not only probably causes serious disorders on human health such as cancer, allergic reaction but also creates new diseases in people. Additionally, the insects are likely to rapidly become immune to the new genetic manipulated crop, which can have a devastating effect on all manners of life, because this will contribute to the food shortage, epidemic and global crisis.
In sum, genetic modification has sparked vigorous debate among people. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages of the manipulation. It is my firm believe that before the widespread appliance of changing gene on which we need to attempt to conduct more researches so as to ensure that it is safe to human.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...d to attempt to conduct more researches so as to ensure that it is safe to human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, if, may, so, well, while, as to, in fact, such as, as a matter of fact, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33802816901 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07781929824 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616197183099 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4530082439 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.333333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5833333333 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154462719796 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517825536532 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349489438962 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0876188676407 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392020519822 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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