Global warming is one of the most serious issue that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
Nowadays, global warming is an issue of increasing concern throughout the world. While there are clear reasons for this global problem, I believe that several steps can be taken to address, or at least alleviate, it.
There are a number of reasons behind global warming, one of which is CO2 emissions releasing from cars. Many people are now making cars as their primary mode of transportation, worsening this global issue as a result because fossil fuels are being used excessively for their vehicles. The more cars are driven on roads, the more carbon dioxide is produced, causing climate change. Another factor contributing to this issue has to do with cutting down trees. When deforestation occurs, much of carbon stored by trees is released back into the atmosphere which can result in deterioration of global warming. In brief, these are the core reasons for climate change.
Governments can solve these problems with some actions. One of them is to improve public transports through making them more comfortable and cleaner so that these facilities can encourage people to use buses or trains instead of their cars to travel. By doing so, carbon pollution can be diminished. Secondly, the government should increase public awareness about the repercussions of cutting trees which can discourage people to do so.
As for individuals, they can also partake in protecting environment from global warming. Firstly, they should stop driving oil-required cars, which are the main factors of carbon dioxide, they might use eco-friendly ones, like Elon Musk’s Tesla, instead. Secondly, people can plant three trees after cutting down one to reduce the harm comes from deforestation.
To conclude, although climate change is the direct result of burning fossil fuels and removal of trees in some areas, these problems can be dealt by govern bodies and individuals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, while, as for, as to, at least, in brief, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1578.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27759197324 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71006215115 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6365183494 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186709929758 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670006585767 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617061955528 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106693676492 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616116713987 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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