Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?
The increase in the Earth’s temperature is posing dramatic threats to human life, thus worrying governments all over the world. This essay will address some major reasons for this environmental problem and propose possible solutions.
According to many researchers, global warming nowadays is not a natural process, instead, it is mainly caused by human activities. Firstly, the utilisation of fossil fumes and numerous agricultural practices have released an unprecedented amount of detrimental emissions, which facilitates excessive greenhouse effects. Particularly, the combustion of fossil fumes to serve massive productions in factories and transportation needs has emitted tons of hazardous chemicals. Meanwhile, methane produced by cattle and vehicles used in agriculture constitutes a large proportion of greenhouse gases. These explain why the most industrialized countries like China, India and the US are also the nations with high levels of rising temperatures. Moreover, another contributor to this environmental issue is the over-cutting of trees to create spaces for the increasing population on Earth. Consequently, the balance between oxygen and carbon dioxide, an important element in conserving the natural temperature of the Earth, has been disturbed as trees produce a huge percentage of oxygen on Earth and help reduce the amount of carbon dioxide in the atmosphere.
However, there are several measures for human beings to tackle this issue. For governments, the application of strict policies to limit the carbon emissions of industrial plants and introduce benefits for vehicles running on green energy have proven their effectiveness in many nations. For instance, in China, thanks to preferential rights offered by the authority to electric-car-manufacturing companies, there is now a tendency to replace traditional cars with electric ones in many metropolitans. Besides, each people could minimize the amount of meat they consume and plant more trees, thus reducing the number of cattle raised and creating more oxygen. Finally, a redesign of living areas to utilize all available spaces so that fewer trees would be chopped down for accommodations might be considered by engineers. For example, if The Line - a city planned by the Arab Saudi government was successfully constructed, it could be home to over 9 million residents with a total square of just 34 km2, therefore, no forest would be destroyed for the construction plan.
In conclusion, although humans have contributed enormously to global warming through their production and transportation activities, they could also solve this worldwide problem by taking proper measures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2283.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73618090452 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30510975294 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 176.041082164 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1637994582 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.6875 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0942032985227 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.030622618722 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439487357304 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612535959294 0.151304729494 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328957137864 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.31 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 145.0 78.4519038076 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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