Government should spend more money on education or sports and recreation .Do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested by some that regime needs to incur money on education, while others believe that sports and recreational field had better be flourished. As per my opinion, facilities related to games and rejuvenation should be provided by government instead of outlying on education.
There are various reasons why am I in favor of promoting sports. First and foremost, youngsters can opt their favorite career path. If young ones do not have interest in studies and they want to be good sportsperson, organizing sports events and providing facilities related to their respective sports will help them to show their caliber in the field they want. To illustrate more, who is going to study physics and chemistry when they really have the desire to be cricketer in their further life? So, sports are the best domain in which government must spend money.
However, others opine that money should be expended on education because they think that when authorities offer good education system to children, they can become good doctors, engineers of future and this helps country to boost their economy.As those doctors and engineers will further serve their own nation, but they do not know if juveniles do study for whole day, they will end up getting depressed.Instead of becoming engineers and doctors they will become mentally ill. Therefore, government is supposed to use its money to make recreational places, where young ones can go and have fun.
In conclusion, I would like to reiterate that higher authorities should think seriously before utilizing their money on education because for the holistic growth of budding minds, sports and enjoyment are rudimentary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23333333333 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.741654002 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.327106842 49.4020404114 237% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 141.3 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231026816038 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914453910605 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068158048162 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13911024427 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00298191767741 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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