The graph shows Internet usage in Taiwan by age group

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The graph shows Internet usage in Taiwan by age group

The graph gives information about the survey of the Age Group from 1998 to 2000 associated with the age of internet users across Taiwan.
Looking from an overall perspective, except for the age 50 or more and less than 15, which showed a trivial rise, other figures dropped initially throughout the time frame.
In 1998, the most popular usage was from 16-30 years old with occupied approximately 53%, followed by the age at 31-50 years with less than 11%. In 1999, both figures experienced a moderate decline, but the former had a more intense tendency by about 10%, while a mere 1-2% was for the latter. They kept their pattern decreased negligibly to 43% and 38% for the 16-30 and
31-35 years old, respectively.
On the other hand, the proportion of internet users under 15 holding a small ratio at 3% for its original level, followed by a climb to 8% in 1999, before remaining jump to nearly 10% in the last term. There was a correlation in the trend of less than 15 and 50 or more. However, the rate for users surpassed 50 was higher than the other for the whole research and finished the study when it reached 10%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, while, as for, except for, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 924.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 202.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57425742574 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41104864592 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613861386139 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 506.74238477 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.0236410959 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173216023884 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716794678111 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117002510467 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105828459407 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134108100112 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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