The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Obesity has become a significant problem in modern world. Increase in the number of obese people is maximizing the pressure on healthcare system. Few think that the most effective method to handle this problem is adding physical education to the school curriculum. This essay will discuss how introducing physical education alone will not help in decreasing obesity.
Firstly, diet plays an equally important role in avoiding obesity. Growing number of packaged food and high sugar contents in junk food has a significant impact on health. Additionally, such food items do not provide the necessary nutrients required for growth and nourishment of our bodies. For instance, processed food is very attractive and easily available at low prices at every school canteen. Students prefer these over homemade items for everyday lunches. Hence, making healthy food available will reduce this problem to a huge extent.
Secondly, motivation is highly necessary to maintain good health. As much as body positivity is encouraged in today’s world, it is also important to educate and motivate individuals on the ill effects of having obese bodies. Without a zeal to maintain a healthy lifestyle, it is natural to fall back into old ways and lead an unhealthy life. For example, a recent poll has stated that 78% people have attempted to eat healthy but went back to their old method. Therefore, being motivated to be healthy is very important to prevent obesity.
To conclude, I would say that though having physical education introduced into school routine will help in avoiding the issue in hand to some extent, there are other factors that should also be considered to eradicate the problem.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24264705882 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68441774244 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617647058824 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0081837265 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176681970008 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532821415253 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451431705138 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107468598053 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528914479059 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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