Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Few argue that the government is spending money unnecessarily on various arts and the same amount could be put to better use for other issues. In my opinion, a separate budget for arts will always be a profit rather than loss. This essay will discuss the reason as to why spending on arts is required.
The various arts of the country represent it's rich culture. Losing such specialties would make the county more mechanic and the people mundane. In current times, people are focusing more on white-collar jobs rather than picking up art forms because of the low incomes in these professions. For instance, in India we have numerous dance forms but we rarely see any dance shows happening. This is because the number of people still practicing these classical dances has fallen. In order to encourage such forms of art and to richen the culture of the nation, government should put in extra efforts and money.
In addition to the rich culture, arts also bring in a plethora of tourists which will improve the country’s economy. To illustrate, Kathakali is an Indian dance form the southern state Kerela. It is recommended that every tourist who visits the state must experience this show for their exuberant performances . This brings in plenty of income for the government of Kerela. A special budget for building better auditoriums and improving the experience of the audience will make such shows more well-known.
In conclusion, even though we are facing many troubles which require money, the name and fame of the country should also be preserved. Hence, a small amount should be put aside each year by the authorities for the development of arts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97491039427 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61670457965 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.07912926 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.75 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187921182829 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06187318049 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523948747101 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116429937234 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527729487894 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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