To growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.
Do you agree or disagree? (
Dubitably, technology plays an integral role in our lives. With increasing the number of online shops traditional stores in towns and cities will be closer. In my opinion, people have more tendency to shop online and I agree with this issue.
In the past people spent most of their time shopping. Growing technology, especially online shops helps them to save time. Not only can spend less time buying their needs, but it also helps them to save their money because besides not making any payment to taxis most sites have offers that lead to saving more money. Different online shops allow people to have a wide range of selections to choose from in minimum time. Hence, people prefer to use online shops. unfortunately, development the of online shops leads to the closing of stores and markets in the future. This makes some people lose their jobs.
Another point is helps vendors sell their goods and products in villages and towns. They can gain more money in minimum time from their buyer. Although the sellers live in small towns which far from cities and people know them, online shops can represent them to other people who live all around the world which is the most important of online shops advantages. For example, the best saffron is related to a small city in Mashhad, but no one doesn’t know this city's online shops could be famous and now all countries use their saffron product.
In conclusion, humans by nature are comfortable and the world is in this direction. Growing technology led to an increase in online shops which people have liked and the rate of use of these shops has risen rapidly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...nce, people prefer to use online shops. unfortunately, development the of online shops leads ...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll countries use their saffron product. In conclusion, humans by nature are comf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78571428571 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25949244797 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.2887183182 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.75 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283659573852 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961198655101 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946603929533 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183989579732 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458228762138 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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