Homeschooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
From time to time, there has been people who chose to study at home rather than go to school. However, many people argued that homeschooling is now outdated and shouldn't exist in today's society. I agree with this opinion to a certain extent.
At first, we must acknowledge that no one know children better than their parents. Parents will know what make their child happy and therefore made the learning process more enjoyable and effective. In addition, children will see their parents safer and more reliable than teachers or tutors. They will likely to express all the problems with the lessons to their parents and therefore easier for parents to teach their child.
Nevertheless, I believe that teaching should be done by professionals. It has been proven that teachers provide a more specific approach that produce better results than parents one. Associative learning is a good example of this technique. Moreover, not every parents are capable of teaching their child at home. They still have to do their own jobs so it will be hard to manage time to teach their children. Most importantly, not all parents have enough knowledge to teach their child, as children grows up the curriculum will be more complicated as well. That said, they will have something that parents do not know themselves and thus unable to explain to their children. Even if they are excellent persons who used to did well at school they could still forget the materials they have studied as time went by.
To conclude, despite the fact that homeschooling brings about some benefit to children, I assure that learning at school gives more advantages to them as I believe more in the abilities of experienced teachers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: shouldn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96853146853 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56349987619 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7160637688 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0659507426453 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335577617074 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662557296223 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0517533797827 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425051942036 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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