Humans are damaging the environment. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?
There is a growing recognition that the environment is wrecked by today’s people. This essay attempts to shed light on the problems which have resulted from this tendency before outlining several viable solutions that should be adopted to tackle them.
There are two major problems that stem from this corrupt phenomenon of human beings. Firstly, water pollution has deleterious impacts on inhabitants’ well-being. This is because, in industrialized and developing nations, an enormous amount of detritus has been released into main water sources, namely wells, rivers, and beaches, leading to thousands of dwellers has died due to lethal diseases such as lung cancer. Secondly, scores of rare wild animals are on the verge of extinction, by virtue of rash deforestation. For example, when it comes to Black Rhinos, the demise of this species is attributable to the loss of natural habitat in the Amazon, which was eradicated by destructive logging of American firms.
To combat this worrying issue, the following feasible steps should be taken. Firstly, media campaigns about natural ecosystems should be introduced to citizens. For instance, students in remote areas such as Cao Bang have raised awareness about the wake of environmental protection regardless of inaccessible distance. Additionally, local governing bodies should be put under prodigious pressure to have responsibility for any erosion or desertification in the vicinity of their authoritative area. Consequently, enforcing strict regulations and fining heavily individuals who misbehave toward surroundings are facilitated, and therefore hundreds of creatures might no longer dissipate.
In conclusion, there are some serious repercussions are ascribed to the extreme environmental insolence of people in recent years, and the aforementioned measures must be implemented to deal with this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76258992806 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18888493246 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690647482014 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2284828329 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123511840499 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397119904796 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049621941072 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781558380707 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476055338517 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.15 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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