Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and society as a whole?
In this modern world, many countries are still struggling with the problem of illiteracy. I think there are two main causes of this issue and three main effects for people concerned and the society.
Perhaps, the major cause from this would be geographical factors. There are places on the earth which have not seen the real discovery of technology because of the limitations of tools to reach them out, leading to limit people who want to pursue an education. Another key cause is lack of government funds. In fact, demands in several areas such as health, infrastructure, projects and social welfare become the main concern for some developing countries. As a result, they cannot sustain the basic need for education, especially for illiteracy issue.
The effects on illiterate people and whole society are that, first, illiteracy is linked to poor health. Illiterate people do not have access to the information that shows the, how t stay healthy. For example, illiterate people may not know the extent to which smoking can negatively impact their health. Moreover, illiteracy contributes to high unemployment rates in a society. In many societies, job markets are shrinking for people with high skill levels. For people who lack adequate reading skills, it may be difficult for them to find and keep a job. Furthermore, illiteracy decreases the rate of technological advancements in society. People who are illiterate do not have skills to keep up with technology. As a result, society suffers because its people are unable to move forward the technology.
Overall, geographical factors and lack of government funds are the key causes behind illiteracy. The effects on the illiterate and the society are poor health, increasing number of unemployment and decrease in technological advancements.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, for example, i think, in fact, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25694444444 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91425164568 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9520789355 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303027279745 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859064303897 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478431917552 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167423442737 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686436137557 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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