Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Over the past few years, pollution and traffic have become a worse problem, which in turn has made people’s life very pathetic and also they are undergoing many fatal ailments. However, some people reckon that escalating the price of fuel such as petrol can be the best method to curb traffic as well as pollution regarding predicaments. Here, I agree with the statement and will deliver other methods to address this problem.
To begin with, the lifestyle of people has been changed very dramatically wherein they prefer to live an opulent and lavish life, as a result, everyone nowadays owns private vehicles, thus hike in the cost of petrol can overcome this ramification very effectively. Firstly, when there will be a rise in the price of petrol then people’s mentality will change, and thereby they may move towards public transportation because of less expense in traveling. On top of that, vehicles have a huge contribution in the rising levels of pollution owing to emission of toxic gases from them therefore if the price of petrol will be increased then people’s monthly budget will disturb and in order to maintain balance in the budget they will be likely to use fewer vehicles.
On the other hand, there are various other measures which can be taken to cope with this grim problem. Firstly, the government should aware people about the dire consequences of pollution on their lives and children so that people could understand their responsibility. Furthermore, there should be a promotion of plantation from the side of government as well as people, as it is the most viable alternative. In addition, people should mostly prefer to commute either by using bicycles or electric vehicles, as there is no emission of carbon. For instance, it has been found in many surveys that Iceland is the cleanest country in the world because there is a huge usage of electric vehicles.
In conclusion, I opine that pollution is the biggest threat for humankind and here both governments and people should come forward to mitigate this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02339181287 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.711224889 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558479532164 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2845106327 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.166666667 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133396252791 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539637579845 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036903550006 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.085753009943 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279796745685 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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