International tourism has brought enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.
Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, travelling in the different places of the whole world become a refreshing and entertainment sources of human life. Although huge amount of tourists may causes of environmental pollution and also disturbance of local people's however it also vast earning opportunity and learning culture of different local peoples . In my opinion, travellers should be more concern about environment and local residents and maintain the cleanliness rules to help to make that place clean and beautyful which also give more benefit to local people.
The greatest benefit travelling in various places, its best earning source for the local inhibitants also good chance to build a communication with different people. Many tourist places are situated in country side with all natural beauties. So the local people can earn by selling thei traditional stuffs and things to tourist which can help to spread their traditions in the worldwide. For example, last year I visited Cox's bazar and I brought so many traditional stones and dresses from that places which represent their culture. Local peoples earn lots of money by selling various dresses, foods and ancient stones so on which beneficial for all.
The main drawback is tourist places always busy with differents people of the whole world in this case some people are not aware about environment. They through dust anywhere such as chips package plastic bottle so on. Which also harmful for environment and local people. Because living places become dirtier and worst for inhibitants. Such kinds of carelessness behaves are harmful for tourist places.
All in all, except some drawback, there are huge beneficial scenario of travelling. Which bring so many benefits for tourist and local people of tourist places though it has some problems.I think, government and people together take some initiative step to save and keep clean of tourist places then such kind of error or problem can be solved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, then, for example, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25080385852 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62300728972 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1250548625 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.866666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1500804678 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574931464067 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413422334002 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099692856655 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173688031969 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.