Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons? Solutions to change negative attitudes
It is commonly believed that the growth of the global tourism industry has negative impacts on destination resorts and countries. While there are various reasons behind this view, several solutions should be adopted by government and international organizations to tackle some of the issues which have arisen.
There are at least two reasons why local residents often consider international tourism as a cause of serious problems in their nations. One reason is that it may have an adverse impact on time-honored traditions and indigenous culture because visitors have no knowledge of them or may be careless of the feelings and the emotions of the locals. Some western holiday-makers coming to visit Southeast Asian countries may wear inappropriate clothes or expose too much skin when visiting sacred places, which is likely to have an undesirable influence on local young people who imitate immodest or provocative behaviour and fashions.Another reason is that foreign visitors revolve/repel the local community with their scant regard for the local environment. Some of them often pollute or litter beauty spots and several famous beaches in Viet Nam, such as Nha Trang, have been spoiled by this lack of respect for the native environment.
However this situation can be improved by adopting some solutions from authorities and international bodies to change negative attitudes. Firstly, the undoubted economic incentives of international tourism for local economies ought to be more widely promoted through the official media. Foreign tourists not only contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel, but also create new related-jobs in service industries, and this aspect must be publicised.At the same time, tourist agencies should urge visitors to respect the loca rules and conventions of their host countries. Secondly, bodies such as the World Tourism Organisation must enforce strict regulations on the tourism industry, ensuring that the local operators are accountable for clearing of litter and disposing of waste in ways that do not harm the environment.
In conclusion, there are several reasons that account for the inhospitable feeling that the local people have for the international tourism industry, and only addressing the concerns of the locals will negative attitudes to international tourism be changed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, while, at least, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2079.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51458885942 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00315392614 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575596816976 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.335416108 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 189.0 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.2727272727 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246670301356 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101538649658 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727441736063 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173761690221 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666017390425 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 13.0946893788 166% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.51 50.2224549098 57% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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