The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
It is often argued that our lifestyle has been significantly changed by the Internet. Even thought some of the alterations have got negative effects, network is considered as a very useful tool. In my opinion, the Internet really has brought dramatic changes to our life as well as it has come into with it's drawbacks.
Firstly, it is an indisputable fact that consumption of networking has made our way of life more easier. It means that as a consequence of a high technology and Internet , everything can easily done with one button. For instance, we can apply for a job or study by clicking in websites without too many efforts. Additionally, we can aware of news, events happening in the any parts of world. We can obtain the all with the help of a miner and very common cellphone. But too much using of the digits may lead to various problems like health and behaviour.
Secondly, it is vitally important to note that using Internet is more convenient and available. Namely, it saves our time and money too. Taking educational system as an example, network gives an amount of chances to learners to study abroad in a distance and to find a significant, rare information in websites. But using the websites purposely is up to the consumer because all data is not believable and acceptable.
To conclusion, I reaffirmed my position again, even the Internet is the main recourse of putting users in a danger situation, the positives of it can overweight it's drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y changed by the Internet. Even thought some of the alterations have got negative effects, ...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
... of networking has made our way of life more easier. It means that as a consequence of a hi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...quence of a high technology and Internet , everything can easily done with one but...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing can easily done with one button. For instance, we can apply for a job or stud...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are of news, events happening in the any parts of world. We can obtain the all wi...
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... is vitally important to note that using Internet is more convenient and availabl...
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...s more convenient and available. Namely, it saves our time and money too. Taking ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81496062992 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88262236969 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602362204724 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4401284693 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3571428571 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164586107483 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531784462437 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665941378412 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10494591149 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100857799059 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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