The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
The internet has brought dramatic alterations rather than drawbacks. Whlist there were some controversies. I partly agree with that statement.
First of all, the internet brought benefical modification to the communication system with providing myriad amenities for internet utilezers. Via social media you can be able to whether chat with the people who live in faraway places or gain much more information about the historical places culture, traditions, languages even if you have never been to. Besides, by internet you can make e-commerce, e-shop and you can purchase or sell items which are necessary in easier way.
Nonetheless You may face with unreliable, unnecessary and harmful data or facilities. Social isolation is one of the risky sides of using internet. Teenagers may be unsociable and tend to spend much more time on the net, regardless of studying. The offensive and dangerous materials also can be accessed on the internet such as instructions for making bomb.
By the way of conclusion, the way of using Internet can be positive or negative effect on humanity. It is up to Internet user’s preference and aim of utilizing the Net.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, may, nonetheless, so, such as, by the way, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 186.0 315.596192385 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83845001256 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650537634409 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 186.0 20.2975951904 916% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 945.0 106.682146367 886% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 186.0 20.7667163134 896% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 81.0 7.06120827912 1147% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119652323412 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119652323412 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079990641015 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332340797151 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 95.5 13.0946893788 729% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -125.77 50.2224549098 -250% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.0 11.3001002004 681% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.79 8.58950901804 207% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 62.0 9.78957915832 633% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 76.4 10.1190380762 755% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 77.0 10.7795591182 714% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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