Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs.
How true is this statement? What influences people when they buy food?
One school of thought argues that contemporary people worldwide are more careless regarding the manufacture of food, while costs play an integral part in people’s attention. Personally, I strongly opine that numerous reasons can be explained for the truth of this statement and other elements can be attributed to the tendency of buying food.
On the one hand, there are various advantages to buying inexpensive foodstuffs. For one, the expenditure per month of people has plummeted, which can comfort low-paid workers in the corner of food. Secondly, we can minimize the waste of food products thanks to the proliferation of cheap food that is contributed to the eco-friendly. For example, the consumption of food is increasing rapidly in recent years, meanwhile, there is a significant reduction of wasted food because of the downward trend of those products that allows people with low wages per month to purchase them.
On the other hand, other factors that customers care about when shopping for food. Besides the essential role of prices, the freshness, the origin and the production of food are extremely affected by the tendency of those people to shop for food of those people. First of all, foods, especially vegetables, are often being purchased when they are still fresh, and the freshness of products can obviously appeal to most people. Moreover, manufacturing ways have a great influence on the quality of food. For instance, typically some organic foods without using pesticides or even fertilizers, are considered the food of choice for consumers in order to have good health. Last but not least, the origin is another element that influences the consumption of food products by people.
In conclusion, I still believe that prices have mostly changed the consumers’ decision in buying food but there are numerous factors that are being paid attention by people when pay to obtain foodstuffs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24025974026 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82240541725 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558441558442 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7261137686 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.153846154 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258458583592 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977211562455 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291380701411 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162314646216 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228404163255 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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