It Is Best To Accept A Bad Situation in our life
In recent decades, the debate on the acceptance a bad situation relating job or money and improving negative situation has never been completely settled. Although some people view it this way, others seem to disagree.
On the one hand, the suffering bad things happening in life such as unexpected job or low-income could be a good way to deal with the life. Frist, if you are so young you will try enduring your job to learn experience. For example, students graduating their school and need a position in any company to have chance experience in the real environment, which supports them solve many problem when they go to work. Second, since you have got many weakness and you need time to change it. For instance, in order to get a high salary you need to adapt five requirement, through the time you gain these you have to accept the low living conditions as well as hard situation.
On the other hand, the majority people think that improving their life is the most important which is worth to invest time. First, because you could not guess what will happen in your life so prepare carefully by finding a good job and savings. For example, one day you can not undertake your job but you do not have money or have savings to cover your life, you could be destroyed by yourself. Second, you can expand your ability when give yourself a chance to get a new experiences at other places. In fact, if you have your own goal, you would plan your schedule and try to get it.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why many people prefer to accept their low living conditions, and this can result in some negative impacts on their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to experience'
Suggestion: to experience
...you will try enduring your job to learn experience. For example, students graduating their...
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Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'many problems'.
Suggestion: many problems
... environment, which supports them solve many problem when they go to work. Second, since you...
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Line 3, column 440, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun weakness seems to be countable; consider using: 'many weaknesses'.
Suggestion: many weaknesses
... go to work. Second, since you have got many weakness and you need time to change it. For ins...
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Line 3, column 553, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'requirement' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'requirements'.
Suggestion: requirements
...et a high salary you need to adapt five requirement, through the time you gain these you ha...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'experience'?
Suggestion: experience
...hen give yourself a chance to get a new experiences at other places. In fact, if you have y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59183673469 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39382332582 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.778228325 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.846153846 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46153846154 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130503191715 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527855383249 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718257375233 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103419279787 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549049122579 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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