It is better for college students to live in school than to live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
Choosing the right place to live has been a resource of controversy among many university students. While I concede that living with family is advantageous in a few aspects, I firmly contend that school accommodation is the best option for students.
On the one hand, there are two significant reasons as to why I accept that college students pay attention to live at home with their parents. Firstly, students may feel a sense of security which may help them concentrate on studying to get high academic achievement. This is because thay can get family support whenever they suffer from illnesses or prepare for semester exams. In addition, students and their families may save a considerable amount of money. To expalin, although students living in schools have to pay for their accommodation, those who live with their parents usually allocate any costs to house, facilities and service.
On the other hand, I extremely claim that schools are the best place for students. The primary reason is that if students chose to live in school, they may have easy access to learning facilities such as libraties, laboratories and group study areas. Students, as a result, may gain learning and working experience and skills which all are essential for studying process as well as their future jobs. Another reason is that living in school may improve students’ independent living skills which is crucial to achieve work-life balance in their future. Cooking for themselves, for instance, provides students with self-care skill whilst the financial management can bring students problem solving skill.
In conclusion, although I agree that living at home is associated with a few benifits, such as saving money or preservation, I am strongly convinced that it is better for students to live in a school dormitory because of many reasons, including enhancing learning, working and living skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22295081967 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8250615669 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567213114754 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0910672759 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.538461538 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434390849098 0.244688304435 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152989795622 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110326124691 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27394329705 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074626260331 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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