It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people say that large public spaces such as squares and parks are important to all urban areas. While it true that cities and towns should have those spaces, I disagree with the idea that it is crucial to all urban places.
To begin with, public locations such as parks or squares bring various advantages to cities and towns. Firstly, local residents need to relax after work or at weekends, and those places are good for them to do such things. For example, in Japan, people usually go to the park for one-day picnics with their families and friends. Secondly, those places have spaces for planting trees, which contributes to environmental protection. If cities do not have such places, the air there would not be fresh.
However, I do not think that large public spaces are needed to be constructed in all urban areas. First, some towns do not have enough houses for their citizens so they need to have more residential buildings or apartments instead of parks or squares. For instance, an Indonesian small town called Bandung does not have any big parks, and its people are in need of resident places. Furthermore, since building parks or squares costs a great amount of money, governments should save money to invest in more important public services such as healthcare or education. For example, most of the cities of Haiti do not have well-constructed public places, but the biggest problem that they are facing is low life expectancy due to lack of hospitals.
In conclusion, while large public areas bring many benefits, I would argue that those places are not important to all urban areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89416058394 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50900928735 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536496350365 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6091141077 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.153846154 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461737555897 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162804966772 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621669434898 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.282366572273 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0889786017013 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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