It is important for children to lear the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree with this opinion.
In this era, children are the future of a nation. If they are intelligent, the country will be prosperous. It is sene-qua-non for children to learn the difference between right and wrongat an early age, it is essantial to help them to learn this distinction. Parents and teachers ought to be allowed to punish to teach good behaviour to kids. I partially agree with this statement.
To embark with, children are the third part of population of nation; it is essantial for them to get knowledge about the thing - which are wrong or right. Parents have the first priority to provide the knowledge about this distinction because of kids 1 to 5 years live with them and after that, children are sent to school by their parents - where it is the priority of teachers - who have the most crucial role to shape and mould the future of the students. They can teach many things : how to behave, how to talk with other people, never speak lie and give respect to elder people and many more. It Is benefitial for offsprings to get these kind of knowledge at the early age. For an instance, teachers and parents can easily mould their children in a better way - which they want. If kids have any bad habit, tutor can punish them: give double homework, suspend from the school.
However, some times some sort of punishments affect the mind of children like physical punishment : beating by rod, buffle also mentally torture, kids can try to take a wrong step. For an example, government already banned the physical punishment, nevertheless, parents and teachers are utilizing it, which impect badly upon offsprings and they will try to suicide. In asia, the number of sucides are increasing day to day.
To recapitulate, parents and teachers both have responsibility to teach the kids about wrong and right at the small feet also punished them but not physically because it reflacts negative impact upon the mind of children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... It Is benefitial for offsprings to get these kind of knowledge at the early age. For an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, third, kind of, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81155015198 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59629429014 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537993920973 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5585230579 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.533333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306473231886 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10622029524 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102034812132 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193160797278 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114875520662 0.056905535591 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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