It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is widely believed that comprehensive the right and wrong at an early age is important for adolescents and punishment is extremely crucial to help them know what discipline is. I strongly agree with this point of view, as I believe that parents and teachers can collectively contribute to positive behaviour to juveniles by punishing them with self-restraint measures.
First of all, family and school can create cognitive thinking of teenagers by teaching them the difference between right and wrong at an initial age. This is because teenagers like a blank sheet of paper and they can easily learn everything when they are a child. For example, if the child is aware of his or her mistakes, they learn from each blunder and they would not make the same mistake when they grow up; thereby perfecting themselves and becoming more mature than offspring who are pampered and do not know what is right and wrong. However, although it appears that disciplining stubborn adolescents will cause them to seek countermeasures, there will be a different way to deal with them.
Moreover, there are many sorts of retribution that parents and schoolteachers could apply to create a good attitude for teenagers. This is because welfare attitudes accompany excellent education and family upbringing is part of the success of youngsters. For instance, wayward juveniles will have their allowances reduced as well as having a curfew after school. Assuming that the teenagers are restrained for a long time, those actions would have a dramatic positive effect.
In conclusion, offspring can be taught based on punishments and discipline, which can have a positive effect on them. In my opinion, every child needs to be taught by family and school, along with discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15679442509 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88888629477 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606271777003 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6537511401 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9166666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321518936991 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100972831145 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824861469905 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177493236559 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115912241417 0.056905535591 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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