it is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. do you agree or disagree? what sorts of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use?
According to some, Punishing children is a necessary task because if they do not understand the difference between right and wrong at early age they could be a serious problem for the society and themselves in future . I am totally agree with this, But the question is what methods should parents use for punishment !
In the past, families did not use proper ways to punish children and even used physical punishment but But with the passage of time and being influenced by the recommendations of psychologists, they finished this type of punishments .
This positive event was still not enough because the society did not know anything about mental injuries and continued the wrong way by replacing bad punishments from a mental point of view, instead of physical punishments .
The first thing to consider for a proper punishment is to choose the appropriate type of punishment according to the child's personality because there is not any A definite punishment that is suitable for everyone .
Parents and teachers should be connected and not use many different and confusing methods .
Parents should be balance in punishment aspect , not to be too strict or too simplistic .
Sometimes you have to allow the child to make a mistake to face the consequences and then ask them for compensate .
In conclusion , we can say that before trying to have a child, we should learn about the correct methods of raising a child and keep ourselves up-to-date and stop using traditional methods, because raising a child is one of the most important goals in our lives , because in case of failure, it is possible May that person deal with his child in the same way and this harmful cycle continues !
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, then, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97526501767 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80828584823 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56890459364 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.483775654 49.4020404114 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.0 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.375 20.7667163134 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404086300765 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168864213992 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791554781134 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172491770917 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0991377321105 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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