it is important to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Using punishment whether hard ones or soft are basically wrong and ineffective for educating children to learn right and wrong.thus relying on exerting punishment is a traditianal method of behaving towards children that end in more negative results. in this essay i disagree with the notion of using punishment.
The effective method used to make children control their behaviour by parents is a method in which paents and children talk to each other and discuss the problems through a debate. As human mind is so complicated parents should be well aware of not using sever puishments and turn to efficient strategy because the elements involved in formin the ultimate character of a child are entertwined thereby one; a parent or a teacher cannot claim they can make a child distinguish the difference between right and wrong. The best way for parents to teach their children is to talk to them and avoid getting angry when they are dealing with them and intrigue them to start thinking about their behaviour.
In conclusion, all kinds of punishment are wrong for children and all parents have to mind it.as a result they better not to punish their children let their children find their interests in a natural and free way.
- Every year several languages die out Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 67
- it is important to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion what sort of punishment should parents and teachers be al 56
- rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas What problems can this cause How might these problems be reduced 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...fective for educating children to learn right and wrong.thus relying on exerting puni...
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Line 1, column 253, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...dren that end in more negative results. in this essay i disagree with the notion o...
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Line 1, column 267, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...in more negative results. in this essay i disagree with the notion of using punis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94685990338 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60953645423 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594202898551 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9988143546 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.666666667 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182740798774 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948526902358 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435128120602 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127418594005 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450917748615 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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