it is neither possible nor useful for a country to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people argue that it is not feasible or useful to provide access to university for a great numbers of youngsters. Personally I completely agree with this view.
There are two main reasons why providing access to university for the majority of young people is impossible. One reason is that it will cost a huge amount of money/prohibitive. If this happens, the budget of the government will not be sufficient to cover the high expense of many buildings that are built in order to serve the needs of university entrance for an increasing number of students. Furthermore, the standard grades to enter into university will need to be lowered as this is the only way to enable those with lower grades in the entrance exam to gain admittance. This will result in the fact that the quality of university education will be degrading.
Apart from the disadvantages expressed above, I believe that it is also not useful to offer university entrance for the majority of youngsters. The main reason is that entering into university requires knowledge and other practical skills related to that particular subjects or fields. For example, students who enroll in university with the goal to become a computer programmer must meet the demand of acquiring a decent literacy of computer skills. Therefore, allowing people with no relevant horizon to enter into a certain university is not an efficient way to enhance the standard of education and life in one’s country.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that providing university access for the majority of young people is impossible and impractical.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, apart from, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09665427509 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95114843693 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509293680297 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8074447873 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209960507238 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868490750327 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708469942733 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156748181929 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395336795586 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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