It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Whether researchers and explorers are capable of travelling to distant natural environment, such as the South Pole is a matter of debate. This development is associated with numerous advantages, but I believe its disadvantages are more significant.
On one hand, there are several benefits of the humans' exploratory progress. An important reason is that humans can broaden horizon about our world. Not only discoverers but also normal people have chances to absorb much more knowledge via records or documentary films about life in these areas. Another reason is that this trend enhances the cultural diversity of the world. As a result, we can connect with people living in these destinations and help them catch up with the modern lifestyle.
On the other hand, the drawbacks of having opportunities to explore remote realm far outweigh the positive aspects. It is begin with the insecurity of expenditions, people who have a trip to these remote natural surroundings may put themselves at risk. For instance, when accessing to the South Pole, travelers might have to struggle with some dangerous animals like Leopard seals and orcas, or deal with harsh climate. In addition, the more number of trips to this kind of destination are, the less money can be invested in other fields. This means governments will have to cut down on budget for education and medical industry, which leads to their shortage. Besides, the over exploitation for researching is one of the culprits of the fact that many species are on the verge of extinction.
In conclusion, traveling to the areas which nobody has explored before is disadvantageous in some ways, which is greater than its advantages. Therefore, it is recommended that all scientists and explorers take notice of this development.
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'begun'.
Suggestion: begun
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20138888889 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93248850155 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6494944709 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.8666666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200823048174 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590104884292 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529085208507 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126355557224 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824650476465 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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