It is often claimed that electronic books will soon replace paper books.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is widely believed that traditional books will soon be replaced by electronic ones. However, I disagree with this view for several reasons.
It is true that E-books are currently booming in popularity due largely to their convenience and portability. These qualities can be seen in how readers can install hundreds of books on the Kindle E-book reader and carry it around to read wherever they want to. However, most people are aware that this kind of book can also bring about adverse health effects for its users. To illustrate, E-book readers have to stare at the device’s screen for extended periods of time, which can cause eyestrain and other vision problems namely shortsightedness. Therefore, a majority of readers agree that the convenience of digital books are negated by the damage it can do to our health.
Proponents of the replacement of paper books by E-books often argue that the latter acts as an eco-friendly alternative to the former, which can incentivise environmentalists to purchase them. This is because a huge number of trees are cut down to produce paper for traditional books, which directly contributes to various pressing environmental issues, namely deforestation and climate change. However, E-readers require large amounts of energy, water and fossil fuels, as well as many valuable metals and minerals during productions. E-readers will also continue to consume energy after they have been produced, as they have to be charged dozens of time during their lifetime. Thus, it is sensible to say that they will not be able to substitute paper books as an “eco-friendly option”.
In summary, given the effects E-books can have on people’s health and natural resources, it is my conviction that they will never fully replace traditional books.
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- Fossil fuel is the main source of energy In some countries the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged To what extent do you think is it a positive or negative development 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 186, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eaders can install hundreds of books on the Kindle E-book reader and carry it around to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, in summary, kind of, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22996515679 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92190975306 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1141861315 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.461538462 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309399939185 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114588225194 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913231608731 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195485739943 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523249953153 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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