It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
The relation of talent and teaching in different field (music, sports and etc.) has controversially become more frequent issue these days. While many believe that some chides are naturally talented, others claim that all children will be good enough in any field if they have appropriately been taught. In this essay, both side of issue will be argued.
First and foremost, many people believe that some children are a genius one. In fact, they are claim that as soon as they have been taught, they expose their unique abilities in especial topic like sport and even with the lowest cost, rapidly complete all stages of success at the early years of life. Leo messy is a good example of that, who has been the best football player in the world for years. However, a child who is born with certain talent will be successful if they step on the right direction.
Given the geography of life and family circumstances, everybody doesn’t try to discover their own interests. Psychologically, all children are able to be good at any field, if they have appropriately been fostered. Indeed, as the children grow up, they need continuous support and encouragement to boost their certain hobby. For instance, Ronaldo who grew up gradually under supervision of Alex Ferguson to has become one of the professional football player since 2006. Therefore, the importance of training in fostering talent is not hidden for every one and it has the crucial role to play nowadays.
In conclusion, however, although many claim that talent is a natural ability, but it is irrefutable fact that talent and training have certainly become an integral part of each other
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...aching in different field music, sports and etc. has controversially become more frequen...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...ays. In conclusion, however, although many claim that talent is a natural ability, but i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98194945848 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70991475856 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58844765343 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9446591255 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23434631625 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746772617856 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462996145213 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140324627705 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453691973885 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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