Juvenile Delinquency
It is beyond doubt that nowadays, juvenile delinquency has become an increasingly concerned issue in many countries which leads to many detrimental consequences. There are many reasons causing this problem, and I believe that it is the government and parents that should take an active role in addressing this problem.
Undoubtedly, one of the justifications for youth crimes is the lack of supervision from parents; therefore, they can get access to age-inappropriate content on the Internet and televisions such as violence and drugs. In addition, while using social media, they may be taken advantages by bad guys to commit crimes like fraud or robbery. Furthermore, family conflicts can be attributed to carrying out crime at a very young age. Parents’ arguments and fights can have detrimental influences on their children; thus, commiting crimes such as cyber bullying can help them to release family pressure.
It is evident that the government and parents have a vital role to play in order to reduce juvenile offences. Obviously, running a campaign will help to raise awareness among citizens and is an effective way to teach children to avoid bad manners and crimes. Moreover, good parenting skills are necessary to reduce youth crime rate. By setting suitable goals and giving advices for teenagers to pursue it, parents can help children pay less concentration to inappropriate contents that are harmful. Moreover, teenagers can avoid crime by taking part in healthy activities like sports or swimming.
In conclusion, even though there are many justifications for juvenile delinquency, the government and parents can take feasible action to tackle the problems
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39163498099 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01749298571 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623574144487 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3286543827 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.166666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101765805028 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0390914453447 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736208177173 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0749455213382 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578575669742 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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