Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products.
What problems does this cause?
What could be done to encourage people to buy local products?
In the omnipresent, it appears that more competition has sparked among businesses and entrepreneurs have been racing against each other, mostly in the marketing field. People have a notion that big companies are raising their budget in promoting and advertising their products and that resulted in a substantial increase in sale. While this maybe valid to a certain, there are heavy consequences that we might have to deal with in the near future.
Firstly, as large businesses or enterprises pour endless amount of money into marketing their products, the quality of those products are actually being neglected. To create a product, the board of direction has to decide the cost for producing, transporting, and marketing. In order to raise the budget for marketing, the fund for producing may be reduce hence the reduce in quality and the rise in the price. Therefore, widely promoted products usually can not live up to consumers expectation. Additionally, this can also cause negative impacts on local products considering that they are not as mainstream, although their quality is far more superior. Generally speaking, local brands are often neglected due to the popularity of big corporation’s marketing.
Solutions can be created to introduce consumers to local products. Due to the lack of marketing and advertisements, local brands can not stand out and create as good an impression to consumers as big corporation. For that reason, local businesses should take the risk and call out for investment to raise their marketing fund. Furthermore, the government can assist local brands through political movements such as exporting local goods to other countries or urge their citizens to use domestic goods. On top of that, raising awareness among consumers is vital, since many of them were fooled by wrong advertisements from large enterprises.
In conclusion, consumers have to be cautious of their purchase and be aware of falsely promoted products by large businesses. Additionally, local brands should be encouraged to become more mainstream in order to attract customers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... fund for producing may be reduce hence the reduce in quality and the rise in the price. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, may, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1764.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36170212766 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02851200434 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.21737652 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.25 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320845611396 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102336941262 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667073893426 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1981508552 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416544140993 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.