Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?
Selection of the right person as head of the different sections in a company has always been one of the most human resources challenging. Certainly, the age of people plays a significant role in this decision and creates a big question about choosing the older or younger people. Although this topic is rather complex, I disagree with using younger people generally, and in this essay describe my reasons.
Firstly, it seems that career experience is a paramount item to choose one person for directing a company which has a direct relation with the age of persons. Having sophisticated experience is an essential part to solve different problems that arise every day and a manager should be faced them as a response. For instance, the answer to a big part of questions may be provided immediately based on having the same difficulties before.
Secondly, it is a fact that accepting of younger boss for some staff with more age and experience is not an easy task which may cause extra problems. For instance, it would be imaginable a lot of disobedience and sabotage to diminish the reputation of the supervisor.
Of course, those who say the younger people may be better referred to some advantages like being more motivated and enthusiastic which will transfer to employees and will be led to having an active atmosphere and huge benefits totally. For example, an old person can not have an appropriate sense of very young people who work on developing products related to their peers.
Overall, I would not wish to underestimate the pores of choosing younger leaders, and it should surely be suitable in some cases. But, in my idea, the advantages of selecting older people as managers in normal situations are more logical according to mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, of course, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95608108108 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82693974014 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3545141333 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.25 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239497047486 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827395995459 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538067029974 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131787289806 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581229160901 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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