Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is claimed that migrating to a country where speaking a foreign language is compulsory can lead to serious social issues and practice issues. While I accept that these problems might happened, I strongly believed that they are not worth cancerring if you are fluent in speaking foreign language.
People with poor language skill are ones who likely have to face with these troubles. In fact, they may be unable to make a successful conservation with other people. This problem may be even worse if they are communicating with native speakers who may use uncommon vocabulary and slangs. In addition, awkward communication might have a bad effect on other aspects of life such as friendship, work. Unless you have a solution to solve those, it is going to lead to depression and isolation.
Nevertheless, these troubles can easily be solved in short amount of time with a good ability in learning a new language. Obviously, misunderstanding in complicated conversation might occurs but it is just short-term issue for people with good language skill.
By practicing, they might be able to fully understand what other people say and subconciously reply as how native speaks do. Moreover a comprehensive conservation or chasting naturally with friends and colleagues can strengthen a person’s relationship, thus, make his or her life more enjoyable.
Even though it is true that having to speak a different language when living far from home country can be a cause to some social as well as practical problem. These troubles can be eliminated effortlessly with a good language skill.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, well, while, in addition, in fact, in short, such as, as well as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09931506849 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96657388442 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3016339456 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416498671208 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142845379136 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18626178096 0.0667982634062 279% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248612056096 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.192754408751 0.056905535591 339% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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