Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, thanks to modernization, people tend to work and study abroad for better living condition. However, some people argue that it can cause a huge of problems, even practical or social ones. And I definitely agree with this statement since I think this trend has both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that language is the connection between different cultures. In contrast, language can also cause serious disadvantages for immigrants, especially the new one. First, not being able to speak local language can affect their social communication and routine activities such as shopping or working. Secondly, it is problematic that crossing a new language to make friends and starting a living when coming to a foreign country becomes one of the most anxieties and other related problems can otherwise devastate to a person's mental health.
However, despite a large of negative problems, language might not be so serious and can be resolved through a long time studying and getting along well with this native environment. Furthermore, with modern technologies such as smartphones, laptops, the learning process is easier to overcome. Similarly, internet offers a variety of translating software, which helps immigrants reach new language confidently without time-consuming. Last but not least, it can be seen that environment of foreign might affect students, for example, students who choose to study abroad can master the native language faster than whom study in motherland.
In conclusion, foreign language affects us in some ways but in my opinion, at first time, it is more bewildering than convenient.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.63008130081 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14885353804 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650406504065 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2343489842 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.538461538 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252594837925 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742403328766 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567452794318 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136125747948 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224977132831 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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