Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is true that languages contribute a huge role to the way people communicate. While some people believe there are serious social and practical problems in living in a country where people must speak a foreign language, personally I partly agree with this view.
On the one hand, there are two evident benefits when one person living in a country has to speak a foreign language. One reason is that the person could be fluent in that foreign language as well as their mother tongue. Moreover, knowing more languages could lead to more knowledge. For instance, the majority of students who study overseas are bilingual and cultured. Furthermore, the must to speak foreign language might encourage people to interact and communicate with the natives of that language. Thereby, more and more social relationships are formed.
On the other hand, this event could cause numerous issues. Firstly, people who couldn't speak foreign language can't communicate at all. For example, elder immigrants found it difficult to learn new languages at their age which results in the incapability of communicating with the new community. Therefore, this phenomenon slowly forms the failure feelings for people. Moreover, the frequent use in both languages could sometimes cause mistakes by mixing languages accidentally.
In conclusion, for all the reasons I have mentioned above, it seems to me it is better to have one major language in a country and others can be used as optional or a must in limited and related fields

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...ilingual and cultured. Furthermore, the must to speak foreign language might encourage ...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...se numerous issues. Firstly, people who couldnt speak foreign language cant communicate...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ople who couldnt speak foreign language cant communicate at all. For example, elder ...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...could sometimes cause mistakes by mixing languages accidentally. In conclusion, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, it is true, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13821138211 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7580274798 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565040650407 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1957759449 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2857142857 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271930940838 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840002506465 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772162770868 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164303336935 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703797029045 0.056905535591 124% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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