Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued by some that when we live in another country, which may impact on our personal life at the same time our practical life. From my point of view, I agree with this statement, because it is an insurmountable pressure on human being to adapt in a new area, people, more importantly, mitigating language barriers to reduce lopsidedness in their life.
To commence with, when anyone migrates to other country they have to entangle with cultural barrier. In other words, people born and brought up one surroundings, buy later they moved to other country at that time they acquire knowledge about second language, their customs, behavioral patterns and rituals,which effect on their psychology. Take it for example, some jargon language has different meanings. So if anyone uses it one country where consider it disrespect, at that time create massive crux to that people, particularly, showing finger in western country is good wish, but in subcontinent introduction of quarrel. Needless to say, to understand nature, proper uses of language and other traditions influence dichotomy between two nations people.
In addition, when progeny go to other country with their parents, they also face some mental and interpersonal problem. This is because, they do not understand what should they do or what their own, therefore, create substantially identification issues. For example, during liberation war huge percent people migrate western countries like the United Kingdom, the United States. After 20 years differences occurred between first generation and second generation, because of earlier thought that their root is in Bangladesh and later thought they are migrate countries citizen why they take into consider their parent belief, their countries tradition and history. As a result, in some occurrence which annihilate their existence.
Moreover, students want to pursue their higher degree in technological developed countries or where they get sufficient privilege, but due to language barrier they could not do this. What I mean by this is that in some country whole education system based on their own language, hence, adopt new language and labyrinth with their own degree may dispirit student to sought new things.
In conclusion, although learning foreign language has many advantages, but if anyone can not grasp this properly create difficulties in social gathering a well as professional life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one surrounding', 'a surrounding', or simply 'surroundings'?
Suggestion: one surrounding; a surrounding; surroundings
...other words, people born and brought up one surroundings, buy later they moved to other country ...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...customs, behavioral patterns and rituals,which effect on their psychology. Take it for...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'disrespects'?
Suggestion: disrespects
...e uses it one country where consider it disrespect, at that time create massive crux to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, for example, i mean, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2050.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42328042328 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84853199784 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3807662665 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190549474349 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664327485893 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441161859422 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112147669867 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222146215082 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.