Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There are arguments that states settling in a foreign country in which you have little knowledge of its language system can impose serious challenges in social and practical aspects". Personally, I disapprove of the statement based on the following reasons.
Problems can be a hindrance in our daily lives only if we allow them to do so. First of all, living in a foreign state where you have limited linguistic knowledge can bring a positive improvement to your personal skills such as social skills and management skills as the most prominent ones. Regarding social skills, since you will be struggling with how you express things in your foreign language, you definitely need to seek out help from locals in which you will gradually develop your lingo and create a social circle with native friends. There is also a tendency that you might team up with other people that have the same Struggle and in such scenarios, you can assist each other to be efficient in the language you are working on. Since you will be mingling with foreign culture throughout the day, eventually you will get used to it with the support of local communities and study groups.
The next would be your management skills; managing your time or problems coming up . In Less time you will have to be in touch with your mother tongue as you are constantly exposed to unfamiliar culture. The ability to assess how you are spending time gets improved because the actual study time and daily exposure to your target language should be clearly separated in case you will get overwhelmed by the stress. This would be certainly beneficial to your work environment as you can successfully live under the pressure.
To conclude, although a few exceptions ought to be made for individuals with anxiety issues, several personal skills are greatly enhanced while living in a foreign country where you have scarce knowledge about it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, so, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95638629283 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61363957726 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560747663551 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.6407648621 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.583333333 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.75 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370880810469 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145419459462 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591465292653 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22836360157 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641099295617 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.