Living in large cities is more and more difficult. What are the problems faced by those who live in big cities? Suggest some measure to solve these problems.
It is true that there are more and more problems that the city dwellers have to face in huge metropolices daily. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this phenomenon, we “or” societies and the government can take steps to mitigate these potential obtacles.
Every day, the major cities' inhabitants have to face some difficulties about traffic congestion, high living cost or social problems. Firstly, in urban areas, the number of vehicles has been increasing in the street, causing traffic jam that makes us not only waste time on transport but also have breathing problems even lungs cancer due to too many exhaust fumes. Secondly, the problem for anyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the living cost is likely to be much higher than that in the countryside. Residents of vast cities have to pay higher prices for housing, transport, and even food. For example, in small town, price of spinach bunch is $1 but in giant cities, we have to pay $3 or $4 to buy it. Finally, there is a dramatic growth in the number of immigrants from villages to big cities. This has led the fierce competitive in the job market. Therefore, the unemployment rate has increased so high that more and more people commit crimes/ become criminals to earn a living. As a result, living in the metropolises is too stressful.
There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, to reduce traffic jam, the governments should encourage residents to use more and more public transit such as bus, metro system and so on. Simultaneously, they also invest in improving infrastructure in urban areas to adapt a population rise. Secondly, citizens of metropolises need to upgrade their know-how or skills to earn a lot money by themselves to pay their living cost. Finally, to decrease crimes, the city government should issue practical actions to attract foreign investment to rise job opportunities and open some vocational training centers to meet the demand for skilled workers in the city. Besides, they would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, governments could certainly implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all urban inhabitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1974.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07455012853 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81677932087 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578406169666 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2715121877 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6111111111 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61111111111 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288121056081 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768426306418 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777426981597 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146431786843 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078003719918 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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