Everyone should stay at school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Education has been playing a pivotal role in society around the world. It is believed that students should stay at school until age of 18 due to its impact on youngster’s careers. Personally, I think that it should not be obligation for all students.
On the one hand, there are some merits when keeping students in school until 18. Firstly, this equips adolescents with enough knowledge and skills to enter the workforce as highly-qualified candidates. This means that they could seek for well-paid employment and have chances to climb up to their career ladder. In addition, children aged 13 to 18 should be carefully guided when they are in their personality development period. Actually, in this period, teenagers who are not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong. Therefore, juveniles need to be protected in education environment to avoid exposing to the real life at early age. As a result, they cannot be easily lured into social temptation and illegal problems such as drug dealing, gambling and stealing which can ruin their bright future.
On the other hand, exceptionally, good or bad, students should not obliged to attend school until they are 18. The first one is that kids with poor academic performance should be oriented to pursuit a different route which can maximize their ability. Moreover, gifted children should be noticed and nurtured in particular training course to boost their ability such as hair designers or electicians.
In conclusion, although schooling is useful for almost students, I strongly believe that youths should not be under compulsory education environment until 18
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24045801527 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86160033595 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5171806432 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0714285714 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192844350246 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717398441504 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834555332631 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142547269092 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460908458873 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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