ln most of the societies, the role of mother ond father differs. What are the causes of this difference? What will be parental roles in the future.
It is not denied that parents are certainly contributing the foundation of nurturing of a child, in which, mother and father have an equally responsible of educated to their children, so much on. While others debated that how differs in their role that could be performed in society in this day and age. Looking from an overall perspective, this essay will be mentioned matters above.
Regarding the role of women, many people probably believed that they have always duties on childbirth and caring all aspects of their lives such as schooling, mindfulness to meals day-to-day, whereas, a father acts as pillar man in charge of ensures the whole of family income. Indeed, most of the parents in Vietnam always formed of their mindset from the ancient, whether women’s voices almost disregarded or even restricted their activities which already distinction of thinking about the sex status.
On the other hand, we are coming to the modern-day, namely the century of 21, where anything has been prejudices revolutionized between women and men. It is influenced by Western cultures for a long time, whereby, parents are gradually obtained by these cultures which are started sharing supervision in developing of children. Both of them, doing everything towards the comprehensive growth of a child that needs necessities than ever had.
In conclusion, parents played a vital role in the growth of children, if one loses of them, a child would be deprived of love, that they are worth receiving and that be hoped that be continuing mindset will be kept later on.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08171206226 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75887285507 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645914396887 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.5286744354 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.111111111 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205428557437 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774530927582 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075542492897 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120055465842 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0854110333082 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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