A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed. What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
In recent years, tourism has emerged as a significant contributor to the global economy, facilitating cultural exchange and economic growth. However, inadequate management of this industry can lead to adverse consequences for the host destinations. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the contemporary world and analyze whether its benefits outweigh its drawbacks.
One of the primary drawbacks of tourism is its environmental impact. Poor management of tourist sites can result in ecological degradation and the over-exploitation of natural resources. For example, the construction of additional accommodation facilities can lead to deforestation and habitat destruction, posing a threat to the natural balance of the ecosystems. Furthermore, inadequate oversight can fuel illicit activities such as trafficking and unauthorized trade of cultural artifacts, jeopardizing the integrity of the host destination.
Conversely, moving on to the conveniences provided by the tourism industry there are two major ones. Firstly, it augments the economy of the country and provides boost with the inflow of foreign exchange. As a prime example, tourism can make an indigenous culture known to the world; sites that show country’s cultural heritage is made accessible to the public, visitors from all over the world will soon flock there. This money is utilized for the development of the infrastructure for both the citizen and the upcoming tourists as well as the preservation of heritage construction. Secondly, tourism has been creating a plethora of employment opportunities for the local people. In other words, tourism boosts a country’s economy by creating numerous new job prospects for the inhabitant.
As has been demonstrated, the tourism industry has downsides such as disastrous impacts on the forest, on the contrary it does not overshadow the beneficial impacts on the country’s economy. Therefore, despite its drawbacks, I believe the benefits of tourism far outweigh its adverse effects.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77557755776 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34663554961 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574257425743 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1184738152 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 7.06120827912 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223317862852 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726254463552 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482822656034 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135746704407 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405722547661 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.26 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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