Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.
Nowadays, many big cities in the global are burgeoning dramatically, accompanied by a lot of troubles which the young must grapple with every day. However, measures could certainly be taken to tackle the problem.
There are two main issues derived from the rapid cities’ development. Firstly, people in growing cities are facing risks to their well-being. When the pace of life gets more and more hectic, the young work and study harder and tend to lead a sedentary lifestyle such as sitting in narrow offices all day and concentrating on work with no rest time and taking imbalance diets that can accumulate pathogenic factors, resulting in diseases related to back and spine, intestinal tract, and blood pressure. Secondly, it is difficult for young people to live in such extravagant cities. When the social-economic is growing fast, the living expenses including rental house, food, and moving costs increase simultaneously that are unaffordable for those who have low income and new graduate students. They could be confronted with these problems for a long time before gaining a better quality of life.
In an optimistic outlook, there are some solutions that should be applied to mitigate the above problems. Firstly, people living in developed cities should try to generate an active, balanced life to evade diseases. For example, aside from work or study, spending some free time doing exercise or playing sports can help people enhance mental health and physical health, avoid cardiovascular disease, obesity, and high blood pressure, the brain becomes lucid and works more productively. In addition, to combat exorbitant expenditures, the young have just one choice which is to earn much more money. Therefore, they need to enhance their knowledge, fulfill their skills and qualifications required for high-income jobs. When they sharpen their expertise instantly, they have more opportunities to be promoted at work and in life.
In conclusion, living in cities growing rapidly makes the youth faced with a lot of difficulties, but there are also methods to resolve these underlying problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34234234234 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82644008221 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630630630631 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8160106467 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.6 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.86666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267310715246 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902627740067 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752009397019 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153478164815 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421823775794 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.