Major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young people living in those cities are facing? Suggest some solutions.
In the midst of the globalized age, there is a colossal upsurge in the number of cities across the globe even the problems related to this trend. Although residing in a metropolitan can bring many advantages to our lives, this phenomenon still causes drawbacks to society. In this essay, I will give some appropriate reasons that lead to this thorny issue and cite some methods to drive this in a positive direction.
First and foremost, it is noticeable that habitats in big cities may cope with alarming problems such as air contamination, noise pollution,… because of the numerous car ownership. Needless to say, the index of polluted atmosphere here in metropolitan is much higher than in the outskirts and this can lead to illnesses such as asthma, respiratory ailments, etc. Secondly, the city dwellers may suffer more pressure due to the heavy workload, hectic working schedule, etc. It can cause harm to the development of residents who live in the city and force these people to involve in a sedentary lifestyle and even obese because of the lack of exercise. Thirdly, settling in a capital area can make habitats more dependent on advanced technology. In spite of the huge benefits from technological machines in terms of education and healthcare,... this convenience may deter people’s innovation and creativity. Obviously, the quality of eyesight of city dwellers may decline because people spend most of their time sitting in front of the computer.
To tackle these negative issues, both government and individuals should give a hand to gain optimal results. To be clear, the government should subsidy on the cost of public transport in order to encourage people to use these models of commuting. This investment from the authority can reduce the carbon footprints exhausted by personal cars. Moreover, people should raise awareness about their health and check it periodically. Instead of cooping up in their own room and immersing themselves on Internet, city dwellers need to practice a healthy lifestyle such as exercising regularly, consuming homemade food, etc. Furthermore, businesses and companies should not require their employees to work overtime and put more tension on them to shoulder this stress. To illustrate, most entrepreneurs in the industrialized city are obliged to their workers not to work more than 12 hours a day in order not to make them knackered and be under pressure state. Finally, city dwellers may partake in programs and campaigns which make their place more worth settling in and better day by day.
In conclusion, it is all stated that living in the metropolitan still affects adversely to our living standards and we can utilize these mentioned solutions to mitigate these horrendous problems. In my opinion, residing in the city does not always mean a negative thing but people should live actively and collaborate with the authority to make our land more well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 41.998997996 183% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2454.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17721518987 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89252431839 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 176.041082164 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550632911392 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 776.7 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4688819084 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200992897205 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550305864638 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446887967527 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119532456356 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227644855571 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 78.4519038076 176% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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