In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
In several urban areas, scheme makers are inclined to organised shops, schools, offices and homes in certain areas and distinct them from one another.
On the one side, the considerable merit of planner’s tendency who placing several point buildings apart become equality in the city layout. The existence of this equality arises the social interation, particularly meeting among the people in the specific places. This happens since human nature as social being and Forbes published as “Movement is the gateway social skills”. Furthermore, this is affected by good psychology things, one of which is context-dependent memory. Distinction place create some more focus in our brain and divider. For instance, if someone went to the school as same as shop, their brain will confuse about what is to prepare and will body to do.
By contrast, we should highlight the demerits of this view are that the separation of essential building can be lack of efficiency. In several countries, the travel cost causes some distress due to the low salary level. Moreover, the citizen has emotional damage when they are on the road by several cause. For instance, traffic jam and driving offenders, cited from Road Sense Australian that facing driving offenders and waiting for a long time in rush hours make law-abiding people shock about their mental.
Overall, in spite of some potential drawbacks, I would contradict that the benefits of planning separated building are immensely important. Those encompass parity of urban grid and better psychology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31707317073 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74401987102 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670731707317 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3600742495 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.615384615 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138783341832 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384018284385 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038508940312 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.076297268405 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470141105902 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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