In many cities, planners tend to arrange shops, schools, offices and homes in specific areas and separate them from each other. Do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages?
City planners frequently place shops, schools, offices and other facilities in separated distinct zones and keep them apart from one another [unnecessary words]. I am personally convince that this issue carries out more advantages which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph
On the one hand, the merits of designers' care to manage infrastructure would be the ease in controlling the mobility of citizens. This means that societies can grab their primary needs properly with great guidance. For example, in Bekasi Regency (Indonesia), the town planning has special regulation from the authority that buildings have to be created with a predetermined distance. Moreover, based on the minister of public affairs, each building has restrictions because of green open space. This implies that every spot has a garden to grow plants naturally and also can reduce sun blazing. As seen in Sydney, the governments create some parks in order to make people still feel cool.
On the other hand, the demerits of this issue can generate high production costs in every construction. This can make it hard for the government to manage their national expenditure. As a result, many cities may experience a gap of building development and also can make societies to demonstrate the authorities. Furthermore, this issue may lead to traffic jams on every highway. Because the government is incapable of predicting what the desires of citizens are. In connection with Jakarta, every area always experiences congestion, especially in the traffic light. Eventually, the government has to produce a new regulation to control the population's destiny because of the distant construction.
To sum up, while the issue would emerge adverse effects to some extent, I would concur that the development of construction can create a neat city governance and also can produce a healthy environment.
- Some people think the manufacturers and shopping malls should sell fewer packaged products while others argue that people have the responsibility to buy products with less packaging Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
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- Many universities charge higher fees for foreign students Why do they do this Do you believe that it is fair Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 89
- More and more people want to own items such as cars clothing and other things that are made by famous brands Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'convinced'.
Suggestion: convinced
...er [unnecessary words]. I am personally convince that this issue carries out more advant...
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Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...more advantages which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph On the one hand, the merit...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lead to traffic jams on every highway. Because the government is incapable of predicti...
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Line 4, column 641, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...produce a new regulation to control the populations destiny because of the distant construc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, as to, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96866241557 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.134916302 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127793579064 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395701294265 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446435113123 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082154685092 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648669224604 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'convinced'.
Suggestion: convinced
...er [unnecessary words]. I am personally convince that this issue carries out more advant...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...more advantages which I will expound in the elucidate paragraph On the one hand, the merit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... lead to traffic jams on every highway. Because the government is incapable of predicti...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 641, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'populations'' or 'population's'?
Suggestion: populations'; population's
...produce a new regulation to control the populations destiny because of the distant construc...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, may, moreover, so, still, while, apart from, as to, for example, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33783783784 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96866241557 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601351351351 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.134916302 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127793579064 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395701294265 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446435113123 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082154685092 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648669224604 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.