In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of in increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
Many people believe that using video cameras help preventing crimes while the others strongly disagree with that opinion because they afraid of violating the human rights of freedom. In my opinion, the beneficial effects of increasing security using video cameras do outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, increasing the number of cameras in public make the resident living in that area feel like being followed and they can not have their own privacy to do what they like. Their activities are constantly be observed by those device. Their faces and their movements would be recorded and sent to security organizations, ready to be analyzed if necessary. Furthermore, the government could collect the information of every citizen and this could be very dangerous because the hacker can attack the main computers then draw the citizen’s information for blackmail purposes.
On the other hand, surveillance camera system helps protect society from many threats and provides people with a sense of safety and security. For instance, if there is a burglary in a residential area, it would be easier for the policemen to identify the robber and catch him as soon as possible thank to the images about the theft recorded by security cameras. Also, previously collected information on the citizen would make the investigation more effective. As well, widespread surveillance in public areas would greatly contribute to crime reduction by deterring potential criminals from engaging in unlawful activities, when they know that security cameras are recording their every move.
Inconclusion, the benefits we gain from installing cameras in public places is outweigh the negative consequences. The safety of people should be considered the most important factor among those questions related to human rights.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to prevent' or 'prevent'.
Suggestion: to prevent; prevent
...e believe that using video cameras help preventing crimes while the others strongly disagr...
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Line 1, column 130, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[2]
Message: You miss the verb here. You should rather write: 'they're afraid'.
Suggestion: they're afraid
...ngly disagree with that opinion because they afraid of violating the human rights of freedo...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
... installing cameras in public places is outweigh the negative consequences. The safety o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42402826855 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84690329044 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60777385159 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.0751114253 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.545454545 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261048268496 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098670519646 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079836274289 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166279597123 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0850637188527 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.