In many cities, the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?
There are various perspectives on the issue of setting some video surveillance equipment in public places to decline the figure for offenses. Many people say that these methods can invade in individuals’ freedom. In my viewpoint, I personally insist that the advantages of these merits dominating its disadvantage ones.
To begin with, despite of some arguments of participants, it is an indisputable fact that the installation of surveillance devices in public spaces plays an essential role regarding social safety. To be more exact, the availability of video equipment allowing polices to catch everything which is happening in the areas. Therefore, they are able to record and send these clips to security organizations as well as detect on time the offense taken in community. In addition, it is understandable to say that if people realize the existence of public camera, they will raise their awareness of concentration on obeying the law voluntarily which is in contributions with security in residential area.
On the other hand, although setting cameras publicly can benefit the government in terms of controlling the safety of residents, there are a little of unexpected effects existing in society. To clarify, in some situations, public cameras can accidentally invade in people’s privacy leading to heavy pressure on citizens when they activate in general spaces. Moreover, if this problem are extended in a long period, that can laid the foundation to some negative resistance resulting the complication in solving the issue that is caused by extreme action of people.
conclusion, weighing up both sides of the argument, there are exist two aspects of this problem. From my perspective, I personally highlight that the advantages of the installation cameras in public outweigh the disadvantages.
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Suggestion: Conclusion
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Suggestion: existed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, in general, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45583038869 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18913158269 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597173144876 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2307426954 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206642757453 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705698924088 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487146766949 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116296796909 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444863035771 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.47 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.