In many counties, women and man are working full-time. It is therefore logical for women and men to share household tasks. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some part of people argues that both men and women are working nearly all day in these days so they should share their household chores equally. However, others believe that households just need to give to only one person in the house. Personally, I totally agree with this opinion that husbands should do chores as same as wives. This essay will provide suitable reasons and explains with examples.
First of all, the relationship between two of them can be increased by helping others do household chores because it shows that they still love each other just like previous days. In addition, his or her who must work full-time tend to be tired and just want to go home for relaxing, and it will even feel better, happier and less tired when they come home and see their house is clean and tidy by their lover. As a result, they can take it easy without worry about these chores, which helps them do their job effectively.
On the other hand, if men and women do not do household chores together and push this responsibility to one side, his or her will have more works to do, which creates stress, while the bond between them gradually tear apart and even worst is divorce. Moreover, people are supporting women's rights at present. Therefore, males can do household chores instead of females as a way to respect women's rights.
In conclusion, males and females should share household chores equally, which plays an important role in family relationships and makes society more develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78682170543 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36546230881 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635658914729 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2565395396 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.272727273 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203613242489 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752573662191 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515694038451 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119380527105 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612315454797 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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