Many developing countries place a lot of importance on tourism. Why is this? Do you think that this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, in some progressing countries, modern lifes have brought to the world numerous advancements in tourism industries. There are plenty of reasons for this trend, which is having a significant effect on a nation and I strongly believed that this is a negative development.
Personally, I assume that there are at least two main important reasons why traveling tendency is being kept an eye on by many states. The first reason is marvelous economic benefits. A well-developed tourism industry can create a lot of newly arrived businesses and careers which are grand opportunities for the local community. Since more jobs are created, it not only reduces the unemployment rate, a serious problem in many countries, but there are also more and more contributions to the government’s budget, which can substantially improve the living standards of people and strengthen the country’s economy. The second reason is that boosting international tourism can not only encourage universal relations but also to share a country’s exotic customs and culture with people all around the world. This also facilitates the experience for many individuals who are interested in mastering multi-cultures and foreign ways of living.
However, this tendency could have negative consequences in terms of the environment and social problem. So far, tourism has created mountains of plastic every year as the majority of street restaurants constantly use this material to pack take-away food and drink. Also, many developing nations don’t have any methods to deal with the waste or to raise tourists’ awareness, therefore, it commonly ends up littering throughout rivers, beaches and roads which would badly affect ecosystems. Furthermore, there is an extensive problem that visitors may also damage various historical monuments as well as landmarks because of their poor consciousness.
To sum up, it is crystal clear that the financial advantages which tourism offers is undoubtedly the main reason why there is an existence of the trend of expanding this industry. Nevertheless, without a country’s proper management, this development will be troublesome in the long run.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...will be troublesome in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1846.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52694610778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13155905658 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5703268345 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.857142857 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271131780535 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084074158263 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054979864261 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164839917041 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353683757083 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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