Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?
In this contemporary world, museum and ancestral places are often visited by tourists while the local people are not able to pay a visit. There are few causes for that, but there are possible solution as well, which I will outline now.
The main cause is probably the lack of interest that a person has towards these historical monuments and museum which are full of antiques. It can be seen, people show less interest in task which can be accomplished easily such as visiting a place nearby. Moreover, individuals are less excited about places they can visit nearby and prefer going out station instead as for majority basic meaning of trip is going outside of town. Furthermore, layback attitude of people is also one of the prominent reason for this. As people think they can visit nearby places without any dedicated planning and end up not going those places for long time.
However, there are various steps that can be taken to lessen this. Firstly, individuals should be educated about the significance of the historical monuments present nearby in cities. Once they will get aware of history, their interest will develop and they will start visiting those places to know more about them. Another steps which can be taken includes reducing the tickets price for visiting monuments, this can encourage them visit these places. As we know entry tickets for most of the these places are priced quite high which discourage people visiting these places.
In conclusion, we can say that local people shows less interest in visiting nearby famous places due to inadequate amount of interest and less excitement they experience. However, these can be addressed by telling them about the importance of that monuments and reducing tickets price.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as for, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06206896552 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4140393963 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527586206897 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1054864279 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356854878024 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13363012198 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084297913663 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236184362203 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276447902975 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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