Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
museums and galleries have been in vogue for some time as people nowadays desire to attain new worthwhile experiences and while many places require visitors to pay a sum of money, the others don't. However, i believe that charge for admission actually brings us more benefits and disadvantages.
With regard to the advantages of charging people, the most apparent one is that visitors will become much more engrossed in the process of contemplation. Whenever somebody has to expend an amount of money to gain access to something, that person will surely respect what he was offered and he will also be more attentive to acquire precious knowledge after the trip. Besides, the charges can also motivate organisers to cultivate the facilities as well as the objects in the museums. An enormous influx of money can cover the expenses for the operation of a museum as well as other sorts of bills. Subsequently, those who are in charge will have the resource to update the existing equipments, decorations and thus, make those locations more attractive to potential customers. having myself visited numerous museums that have erased free entrance tickets, I have found that those places are actually marvellous due to the fact that everything from mottos to artifacts were well-organised.
Nevertheless, the charges are found to be detrimental to a certain extent. many citizens may be discouraged to pay these places a visit when they think of the expenditure they need to cover. For museums, this variation can facilitate frauds as to the amount of money that operators demand; they are given the right to establish a set of ticket fees at their expense and this can lead to many negative results. From my experience, 2 years ago, i became an unwitting victim of a nefarious activity: the ticket-sellers modified the fee on their own will.
Despite these aforementioned disadvantages, i assume that the boons entrance fees can bring about are much more worthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, well, while, as to, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08978328173 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87731883236 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600619195046 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.885356844 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8461538462 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225124464403 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752856230556 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066420914244 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128967446046 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10970916205 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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